Reply To: Task 1 and 2 writing
xong young choi
you see the above andvertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory. write a letter to the organisers of the course. in the letter
– give some background information about yourself
-explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
-enquire about the methods used on the course
-enquire about course fees and dates.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a twenty-eight-year-old petrolium engineer and I currently work for an international oil company which offers me a permanent offshore job. I recently saw an advertisement for your course on enhancing the memory on Tivi.
I am available to inform you that my ability of memorizing the information is absolutely awful. It is very hard for me to retain the datas or numbers and keep these in mind for a long time. I find your program extremely practical to deal with my issue. I also collected that many people were be better due to yours. That is why I am keen to enroll a course in your institution.
I am grateful if you could let me know some details of the methods that are used on the course to treat your customer.
In addition, I would like to enquire about how much the class fees are and ask for what the class schedules are so that i can be able to suit myself to those.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Choi Xong Young
please help me check my letter ( give me my mistake and my score)
thanks you guys.